Hi everyone ,
Just borrowed Myra`s computer as mine is doing a virus check so here are the results.
John, I like the position of the lady , just wonder about her closed eye.
Paul, Find this a little dark, her hair blends in with the background and also covers her face.
Sue, A striking shot it stands out for me , like the grainy treatment.
Tracey, I have a problem wiyh this, her hand looks larger than her face and i find this intrusive.
Ian, A bold B/W image, but the blacks blend into the background, hair and dress etc.
Berni, I find my eye is drawn to the burntout window at the far end.
Myra, Would like to have seen more of the surroundings, but a good show of smoke.
Lee, A nice portrait , but once again i have a problem with her arms.
Len, I find this very busy, no focal point to rest my eye upon.
Andy, A good portrait, nice catchlights, and better positioning of her arms.
Steve, I like this image,but my eye is drawn to the light source.
Pammie, Yes it is different, and can`t make up my mind about it.
Bert, These are my favourite sweets, but think this would make a better colour image.
Tom, Like this a lot, the grasses stand out well.
Mark, I find this a little flat, some light on the building would pick out more detail.
Here are my top three,
3rd --- John.
2nd --- Sue.
1st --- Tom.
Over to you Tom to choose a new subject.
Thank-you everyone for entering. Des
Competition # 23 BLACK & WHITE .
Re: Competition # 23 BLACK & WHITE .
Thanks for the judging Des, and congrats to our winner Tom!
Best regards
John
John