Melissa at the Beach
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Melissa at the Beach
Taken from my latest Blog post - http://www.pauljones.org/?page_id=55
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Re: Melissa at the Beach
Paul, what John said.
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Re: Melissa at the Beach
1. Looks good but I dont like her in the middle.
2. She does not look comfy and she looks old compared to the other images.
3. Fine just the sky at the top looks a little burnt out.
2. She does not look comfy and she looks old compared to the other images.
3. Fine just the sky at the top looks a little burnt out.
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The second one is my favourite.
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Re: Melissa at the Beach
Great photography Paul, however, the arms in image one and two bother me a little. In the first image, the arm trailing into the grass makes it look slightly deformed - as in the second image where the right arm is almost hidden away. They both draw me away from a beautiful model. Hope you don't mind me commenting
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Re: Melissa at the Beach
Cheers Phil.PhilipHowe wrote:The second one is my favourite.
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Not at all Janice. You should never be afraid to comment.Janice Freeman wrote: Hope you don't mind me commenting
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If you're interested, I've just added more images 'Melissa at the Beach (Part 2)' to my website.
Link - http://www.pauljones.org/?p=672
Link - http://www.pauljones.org/?p=672
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