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Melissa at the Beach

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Taken from my latest Blog post - http://www.pauljones.org/?page_id=55

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Works for me.... :)
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Paul, what John said.
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1. Looks good but I dont like her in the middle.

2. She does not look comfy and she looks old compared to the other images.

3. Fine just the sky at the top looks a little burnt out.
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The second one is my favourite.
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Great photography Paul, however, the arms in image one and two bother me a little. In the first image, the arm trailing into the grass makes it look slightly deformed - as in the second image where the right arm is almost hidden away. They both draw me away from a beautiful model. Hope you don't mind me commenting :oops:

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PhilipHowe wrote:The second one is my favourite.
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Janice Freeman wrote: Hope you don't mind me commenting
Not at all Janice. You should never be afraid to comment. :D
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If you're interested, I've just added more images 'Melissa at the Beach (Part 2)' to my website. :D
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