Eleanor

[Stbourne]

Youngest daughter now 15months, time has certainly flown by.
Here is my latest portrait of her using a flash in an un-difused soft box.
Hope to see you all in the New Year. All the best and have a good Christmas.

[John]

Very classy, a great portrait! I love the lighting.

[Stbourne]

Thank you John.

[Paul Jones]

Hi Shaun

I like what you're shooting for here. She's a cutie.

Two possible improvements:

LIGHT POSITION

Raise your main light up higher.

Do you see how you have the catchlight in her eyes at the 9 o'clock position? This has resulted in the nose shadow going across her left cheek. If the light was higher so that the catchlight is at the 11 o'clock position it would make for a more flattering light (Rembrandt).

EXPOSURE

I get that you were going for a subdued look, however the image is around three stops underexposed, so gives a somewhat 'muddy' look.

Expose for the face next time.

Here, I've altered the 'Levels' to raise exposure. I hope you won't mind me editing your image.

Better? Or worse?

[Stbourne]

Thank you Paul for the advice, and taking time to comment.
As she was bum shuffling around I thought I'd leave the soft box on the floor etc (for safety) but can see what you are getting at with shadows etc.
I think my MacBook screen must be a lot brighter as the image I have there doesn't look so under exposed, learning curve there too I guess.

Thank you

Shaun

[Tracey McGovern]

I wondered what it would look like in mono with a hint of sepia.......

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Hope you don't mind me having a fiddle Shaun

Tracey

[Stbourne]

Not at all Tracey,
Wife doesn't like any mono pics I do of the kids (I do them anyway).

Regards

Shaun