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THE FIGURE ON THE STEPS
Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2016 8:36 pm
by mikeaspinall
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This image was one which I put into the critique night last Thursday. Image 1 was the original and no. 2 is after the comments made.
Am still struggling with an earache (no not Ruth) so maybe haven't done enough with it in which case your comments would be
appreciated. Don't know why image 2 is before no. 1.
Re: THE FIGURE ON THE STEPS
Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2016 11:56 pm
by John
It's a really good image either way, but Version 2 does hone it a little bit further.
Re: THE FIGURE ON THE STEPS
Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2016 9:14 pm
by Paul Jones
I'm struggling to spot the differences between the two images.
What were the comments? And what have you changed?
Re: THE FIGURE ON THE STEPS
Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2016 10:51 pm
by John
Look at the bottom of the robes, the hem has been darkened to remove a distracting highlight.
Re: THE FIGURE ON THE STEPS
Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2016 8:24 am
by mikeaspinall
Hi
Thanks to El Presidente (the fussy one) also toned down the front shoe and lightened the back one. It WAS a critique night
and I listened. The only question now is will it do well in a competition but then who knows?
Re: THE FIGURE ON THE STEPS
Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2016 11:42 pm
by Paul Jones
Got it, thanks.
I didn't really notice it before, but now that you've pointed it out it is an improvement.
Re: THE FIGURE ON THE STEPS
Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2016 6:59 pm
by mikeaspinall
Cheers Paul and of course Cheers John.