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Critique From this Morning
Posted: Sat Sep 24, 2016 3:51 pm
by Sue
Re: Critique From this Morning
Posted: Sat Sep 24, 2016 10:17 pm
by Paul Jones
For me, the new versions are much better.
More interesting eyes on photo 1 and you've tidied up the neck area.
Better scattering of images on the joiner and you've raised the exposure so it's not as muddy.
I like the Skipool image.
I envy your creativity Sue.
Re: Critique From this Morning
Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2016 12:03 am
by Sue
Thanks Paul
Re: Critique From this Morning
Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2016 11:41 am
by Gordon Armstrong
The joiner is much better. The scatter looks much more natural and the white is less dominant. Breaking up the lines of the image has introduced a real sense of movement. The exposure is also brighter and better for it.
I like the creek image. Using the image as the background really works here.
Gordon.
Re: Critique From this Morning
Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2016 10:46 pm
by Sue
Thanks for your comments Gordon much appreciated
Re: Critique From this Morning
Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2016 1:46 pm
by mikeaspinall
Hi Sue
Your expertise is amazing and the changes do improve the images. I said to you on Saturday that these kind of
pictures are not my cup of tea (obvious really in my case as I don't understand Photoshop) but I can appreciate the
work you have done to create the images.
Well done Boss Lady.
Re: Critique From this Morning
Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2016 10:55 pm
by Sue
Thank you for your comments Michael
Re: Critique From this Morning
Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2016 2:29 pm
by mikeaspinall
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Re: Critique From this Morning
Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2016 2:31 pm
by mikeaspinall
Hi
Thought that I would add my five pennyworth on Saturday morning. Herewith the original 'Guitarist' and then the
final version after advice from the mighty John and Paul.