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Critique Suggestions From this Morning

Post by Sue » Sat Jun 04, 2016 5:23 pm

One of my photos from this mornings critique; It was suggested a full colour version, A sepia version & possibly loose some from the sky + the gate from the left hand side. I've had a go at the suggestions, please tell me what you think?

Original:
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003 Original.jpg (322.11 KiB) Viewed 2313 times
Colour:
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Sepia:
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002 ADAPS.jpg (322.11 KiB) Viewed 2313 times
Still looking through my photos for a dead dog or horse for another photo! :-d
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Re: Critique Suggestions From this Morning

Post by John » Sat Jun 04, 2016 5:31 pm

Interesting. I'm finding I like the colour version best now, but partly because there isn't much colour, making it look like it's partially faded.

I haven't got a dead dog or horse handy, but I might be able to arrange a cat...... :lol: (animal lovers please note this is a joke!)
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Re: Critique Suggestions From this Morning

Post by Paul Jones » Sat Jun 04, 2016 6:04 pm

The colour version definitely for me.

I probably went over the top with my critique this morning, but just found the original too 'samey' to what I see other people doing all the time.

It's a good shot nonetheless. Well done Sue. 8)
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Re: Critique Suggestions From this Morning

Post by Phil Jones » Sun Jun 05, 2016 11:56 pm

I agree. Colour for me & also prefer the crop on the left hand side.

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Re: Critique Suggestions From this Morning

Post by Janice Freeman » Thu Jun 09, 2016 11:47 am

I also like the crop, removal of gate and the colour version. The sort of image that a do like.

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Re: Critique Suggestions From this Morning

Post by Paul Jones » Thu Jun 09, 2016 10:12 pm

Sue - which do you prefer?
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